Elec26's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Frog]

I have to say...

When watching the beginning with the bug (or whatever it was) falling from a very plain looking sky, I thought "hoo boy, this is gonna suck. It'll be like this. That thing falls from the sky, the frog eats it. 'THE END'. However, I was pleasantly surprised. While the music and graphics are reminicent of an 80s computer game, that's part of this flash's charm. There are way too many flashes out there that have more "advanced" electronic music and flashier graphics but ultimately last about 5 seconds and then that's it.

At any rate, this is very nice work. I'd I'd like to see more of this. Just be sure to keep it good.

[Once Upon a What?!]

Not bad

It wouldn't hurt for you do add color though. It's okay as it is but I'm curious as to how it would look in color.

[For Science]

The concept is good, but...

you need to make it longer and add more stuff to it. For example, you can show how the scientist deals with controling his new flying bathtub in order to avoid obstacles (e.g. blimps, hot air balloons, planes, birds, handgliders, flying pigs, etc..0

[Mario's detrail]

And you made it sound so interesting...

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Author Comments

"Mario, a plumber from the Mushroom Kingdom has gone to save his family. Bowser has decided to get to Mario, he must play dirty."

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It's just Mario jumping off the edged repeatedly...or is this unfinished?

BottleCapClock responds:

OH NO, it's finished XD

[Scary Stuff]

The Cursed Video on Crack!

I loved it just because it was so insane.

SkoolCool responds:

hahaha, thanks

[My PSP Is Bricking]

Nice prank

Seriously! Or did you accidently reload the preloader without the movie ;)

And it's not exactly 10 minutes long--it's length varies from viewer to viewer. For me it was only a minute long but for my cat, it was about 20 minutes long :D

kanamomashouse responds:

i am glad that you saw the joke in this flash. you are a good person. :D

[Oblivious]

Make the sound clearer

I can only make out a few words and they're not enough to explain anything. The animation doesn't explain anything either.

1. Guy is sitting in a chair doing nothing
2. Woman comes up and starts yelling something and then her head explodes. Guy doesn't care
3. Guy is at videogame store and starts throwing games around and then gets "Oblivian". The only reason I understood this part was because of the context
4. Guy starts playing it but then the flash ends

Upon watching it again, I realize that in the first scene the guy wasn't just stitting there, but was playing videogames. So in addition to the sound and animation, you need to improve the artwork on this so people can actually tell that he is playing videogames and not just sitting in a chair sulking in his boredom

All in all, the storyline (at least what I got from it) isn't bad, it's just poorly executed.

So what you need to do to improve this is

1. Make the audio clearer and the words less garbled
2. Make it clear in the artwork/animation as to what the character is doing
3. Make the ending clearer

Also, in the scene where he's chucking the games every which way, have a store worker confront him about it and then recommend Oblivion

[Flying Saucer]

Nice

The animation is smooth and the artwork is good. All it needs is some sound.

[Pokeball Z Episode 2]

Yeah, it is better than the first one

At least I could hear the audio this time. Still, keep practicing with that microphone.

By the way, how did Lucario's head not friggin' explode when he was walking around the globe in outerspace? Maybe that point can be brought up in the next episode.

[Fly Dance]

Cute!

It needs coloring though. A background wouldn' t hurt either.